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Painting a Masterpiece by ~jerzchick16:iconjerzchick16:





I値l paint a picture for you today
But instead, I値l use my body
The tools are a knife and brush
The paint is red
The paint is my blood

I値l cut everywhere I can
Make it the darkest of reds
Take my clothes off
Paint my entire self
Fight against the pain I feel

If my face begins to clear
I'm sorry
Tears are a form of water
I値l slit my jawbone
Paint over again

Shake for awhile
Clench my teeth tight
Feel it all run down
Get everywhere, even my feet
Its okay, I'm fine

Drop the tools I used
Let them fall down slowly
Fall down to my knees
Sit in the mess I致e made
Shiver, so cold, so numb

Lie there all alone
So red, so hurt, such scars
A will to want what痴 best
A bruise so old, so thick
Can I paint a picture for you today?
©2006-2009 ~jerzchick16
:iconjerzchick16:

Author's Comments

i wrote this in my head first, well, actually i envisioned it in my head and then wrote it down to explain my vision.

...i cant really explain my thoughts about this one...

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:icon6-simplicity-9:
hahaha where the hell have you been hiding this, you sick bastard. I love it! =D

my smile was so big i felt like it would bleed. and i loved it.

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Stock account: ~Simplicity-Stock

This shade of ordinary burns my eyes
simplicity, i despise
in simplicity i'm disguised.
:iconjerzchick16:
i guess somewhere deep inside, i can feel more than just silly emotions that everyone is used to seeing in my writing. thank you so much sasha!

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if i stop myself before loving again, am i stopping myself from the greater pain as well..or only causing more of it?

member of ~Deviant-Underground, *Circleoffriends, ~invisible-inc, *The-Red-Envelope, and =PoetryPlease
:icongoddessofwrite:
I get the most gruesome picture in my head when I read this...

I have to say this is one of your best imagery poems.

A good theme too.

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I am patient until a you open your mouth and all I hear is silence.
:iconjerzchick16:
yea well i wrote the poem from an image in my head, as bad as that sounds...

this poem was actually hard for me to write because its something i've never done before. thank you

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if i stop myself before loving again, am i stopping myself from the greater pain as well..or only causing more of it?

member of ~Deviant-Underground, *Circleoffriends, ~invisible-inc, *The-Red-Envelope, and =PoetryPlease

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