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Smother me under a pillow
Watch my every move
This is how life works for us
(Thanks, I needed that)


You don’t realize who you are
Don’t see how much you’re there
Suffocating me without words
Taking away freedom well deserved
This act you portray for me
The play ended a long time ago
So please, remove the pillow
Give me back myself

Smother me under a pillow
Watch my every move
This is how life works for us
(Thanks, I needed that)


Your actions speak so loudly
Never covered up with truth
Caring never seemed so sickening
Love never felt so wrong
I never wanted to be like you
Choosing to be another
Not letting you control my life
I can’t let you ruin everything

Smother me under a pillow
Watch my every move
This is how life works for us
(Thanks, I needed that)


You stole me away from the world
You gave me life, yet took it back
Taking my words, my views, my concerns
Throwing away what little hope I had
I remember when I said, “I love you”
And all you said was, “Okay dear.”
Hurt, alone, wrapped up in agony
I want you here, yet gone for good
©2005-2009 ~jerzchick16
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i wrote about a subject, had tears fall from my eyes, and now i'm here. this could be taken in many ways. enjoy.

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:icongoddessofwrite:
Wow..a great poem, and indeed a sad thing to write about... :worry:

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A good laugh is all we need to get one big smile going around the world. :O_o:
:iconlilithlairpoetry:
Talk about a kick in the head then the toss out...your words make it feel so real and alive...*ow my head hurts now*

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:iconjerzchick16:
yes, and thank you dear

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if i stop myself before loving again, am i stopping myself from the greater pain as well..or only causing more of it?

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:iconjerzchick16:
wow :hug: thank you so much lee, i really appreciate that

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if i stop myself before loving again, am i stopping myself from the greater pain as well..or only causing more of it?

member of ~Deviant-Underground, *Circleoffriends, ~invisible-inc, *The-Red-Envelope, and =PoetryPlease

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