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Her Story, Until Now

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Tears falling down my face
Empty words simply left unsaid
Music blaring to no end at all
My heart spilled all over the ground


What has happened to this amazing woman?
She was going to be a lovely mother
And work to help other people survive
As well as be someone special

Shattered memories stir inside
I feel like I have disappointed you
My love, my life, my everything
Not even tears can save our love


She was a great person at heart
No one worked as hard as she did
Or tried so hard to make things right
Between everything and everyone

I tried my best, I really did
I’ve worked hard enough to cry
And willed my trembling heart
To do what no other person could do


She gave life her all no matter what
She fought through the hard times
And struggled just to find herself
In this place where evil is at play

It hurts to even think of what happened
I know that I have affected many people
And have changed their lives for the better
Even in my short time of appreciated existence


She knew just how to motivate people
And always valued their love and devotion
Her spirit will live on now and forever
Watching, and guiding us through life
so a friend of mine told me that a girl she knew got into an accident and got hit by a train today. it really made me feel horrible and got to thinking...we know what our reactions are to death when we know person, but what about what they're thinking after they've died? what if people could somehow know what a person who has died is thinking just after the event has occured, and be able to know it, and yet not be psychic or anything? interesting. the italisized parts are the girls thoughts and the regular parts are the world's i guess .. if that makes sense.

i hope you like it.

title thanks to who is the friend of the girl who has died. thank you becca, and i truly am sorry.
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GoddessOfWrite's avatar
I remember reading this! And it STILL is absolutely amazing in my eyes. An excellent job, dear.

-Jennifer